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考前30天狂背作文 第三章 范文点评(48)
 
08-05-06 15:23:58 来源: 作者:

Direction 21
Read the following story carefully and write an essay in which you should:

1. retell the story briefly;

2. interpret the meaning;

3. make your comments.

You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

题目:

Where are we going?

A boat docked in a tiny Mexican village. An American tourist complimented the Mexican fisherman on the quality of his fish and asked how long it took him to catch them. "Not very long," answered the Mexican.

"But then, why didnt you stay out longer and catch more?" asked the American.

The Mexican explained that his small catch was sufficient to meet his needs and those of his family.

The American asked, "But what do you do with the rest of your time?"

"I sleep late, fish a little, play with my children, and take a siesta with my wife. In the evenings, I go into the village to see my friends, play the guitar, and sing a few songs...I have a full life."

The American interrupted, "I have an MBA from Harvard and I can help you! You should start by fishing longer every day. You can then sell the extra fish you catch. With the extra revenue, you can buy a bigger boat. With the extra money the larger boat will bring, you can buy a second one and a third one and so on until you have an entire fleet of trawlers. Instead of selling your fish to a middle man, you can negotiate directly with the processing plants and maybe even open your own plant. You can then leave this little village and move to Mexico City, Los Angeles, or even New York City! From there you can direct your huge enterprise."

"How long would that take?" asked the Mexican. "Twenty, perhaps twentyfive years," replied the American. "And after that?"

"Afterwards? Thats when it gets really interesting," answered the American, laughing. "When your business gets really big, you can start selling stocks and make millions!"

"Millions? Really? And after that?"

"After that youll be able to retire, live in a tiny village near the coast, sleep late, play with your children, catch a few fish, take a siesta, and spend your evenings enjoying your friends!"

审题:

在本书的大作文中,我们不仅为大家提供了图画题和图表题,还提供了一些比较特殊的题目,比如这篇看文章写作。我们这样做,不仅因为国外考试中有类似的形式,更重要的是想拓宽大家的视野,提高大家的应变能力。

该题目先给出了一篇极富哲理的三百余字的短文,而后提出了三点要求,简述该故事;阐释其中含义;给出你的评论。这篇文章可以分成三段来写:第一段是简要地重述该故事;第二段阐释含义并作出评论;最后一段是结语。

Sample:

In the above story, an American tourist wishes to turn a Mexican fisherman into a millionaire so that the latter can enjoy a happy life. The fisherman simply turns him down because he has been living that kind of happy life now.

This story makes every one of us look at the ultimate question of happiness closer and deeper. Do we need to tell others how to be happy? Is getting rich the only way to be

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