托福考试作文高分语言加分点：文体恰当

the match, and they returned in low spirits.
   Badly defeated in the match, the team returned in low spirits.

(8) Africa is the second largest continent. It is about three times as large as China.
   Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

(9) He was eager to finish the work, so he continued to do it until midnight.
   Eager to finish the work, he continued to do it until midnight.

(10) She has experienced love, grief, hate and happiness.
    She has experienced love and hate, grief and happiness.

(11) begin—commence; deep—profound; lucky—fortunate; end—terminate;
begin or continue—proceed; raise-elevate; unnecessary—gratuitous;
clear—explicit; same-identical; learned-erudite; try-endeavor;
queer or strange--eccentric

(12) go on—continue; look into—investigate; come across—meet; turn out—produce
    put up with—bear or endure; get away—leave

(13) photo—photograph; ad—advertisement; bike—bicycle; pop—popular
    Gym—gymnasium/gymnastics

(14) lousy—bad, terrible; mighty—very, extremely; neat, cool—fine, pleasant;
in hot water—in trouble; make a hit—succeed in doing something;
make a big deal about something—exaggerate the seriousness of something
talk someone’s head off—speak too much

4． 散句与圆周句

If we wish to remain free, if we mean to maintain justice, if we hope to be esteemed throughout the world, we must be prepared to defend, whenever it is threatened, the liberty of each individual citizen.

With the trumpets of blaring, the drums booming, and the children screaming their wild delight, the marchers passed in review.

We have done our best, although our dreams have now faded, our efforts have proved fruitless, and we have tasted the bitterness of defeat.

Even though the day was bright and sunny, and children played near the gate, unaware of what had happened there twenty-five years ago, most of the adult visitors at the site could still feel the unutterable terror of the place.

Everyone was laughing, despite the fact that our car had a flat tire, and it had started to rain, and some large black ants were devouring our picnic lunch.

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