托福写作--锻造地道英语句子

aking friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

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