怎样有效看待一篇雅思大作文的主体段
时间:2008-07-15 10:21:17 来源:朗阁培训中心 作者:
9.
definition
下定义
10.
analogy
比喻
◆对于主体段的结构剖析
scoring criterion 1: AIE (
注：新的评分标准里被
Task Response
所取代
)
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Topic |
Ideas |
Evidence |
Arguments |
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Outstanding advantages
(here you should say why it is a blessing) |
1.
free people from heavy labor |
a.
saving labor and time for creative jobs |
cause and effect |
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b.
make good use of mentality , not physical strength |
explanation |
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2.
much faster |
enhance working efficiency and productivity |
cause and effect |
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3.
help people do hazardous jobs |
three examples |
exemplification |
scoring criterion 2: CQ (关联词，代词) (注：新的评分标准里被Coherence and Cohesion 所取代)
To start with…
first… / second…/ third…
in this way…
this means……
which( 代词 )…
such as…
first… / second…/ third…
in this way…
this means……
which( 代词 )…
such as…
scoring criterion 3: SS (注：新的评分标准里被拆分为Lexical Resource / Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
simple+simple+simple(
分词作状语
)+simple+relative clause+simple
V: mankind---people---humans---human beings
◆练习：对本文下一个主体段进行模仿分析
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◆附录：主体段第二段分析答案
AIE:
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Topic |
Ideas |
Evidence |
Arguments |
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threats posed by robots |
1.
increase in unemployment |
cannot keep up with the pace and precision |
explanation |
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2.
raising unnerving questions |
a.
be turned into evil monsters |
explanation & exemplification |
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b.
take over the whole world |
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c.
rule humans like slaves |
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