怎样有效看待一篇雅思大作文的主体段
时间:2008-07-15 10:21:17 来源:朗阁培训中心 作者:
众所周知，范文分析是雅思写作老师课上必不可少的一部分。老师可以在范文分析的时候剖析结构，分析语言点，连词以及观点。通常，如果老师掌握的好的话，一篇好的范文能够分析到一个小时甚至以上。分析范文的目的其实是在于帮助学生掌握雅思大作文的考试规律，方便他们在家复习看范文的时候可以有的放矢。在这里，所谓好的范文，是指从前没有接触过议论文写作的学员能在短时间内有效模仿的文章，而并不一定是要那些词汇句式复杂的所谓“高手”文章。基于以上目的，老师可以用高分班彩虹写作书中的内容来进行课堂讲解。讲解除了语言点和词汇点以外可以按照评分标准，介绍论点论据论证方法，连接器件和句式来进行。下面以彩虹书
P36的
robot一文来举例。
◆文章主体段
To start with, robots have brought about several outstanding advantages to mankind. First, with the use of robots, people can be freed from the heavy workload required by industrial mass-production. In this way, a lot of human labor has been saved, enabling humans to devote more time and energy to some creative and challenging work. This means we may put our mental capacity into full play rather than merely tiring out our physical strength. Second, robots work much faster than human beings, which have greatly enhanced working efficiency and productivity in many factories where they are actively employed. Third, robots with artificial intelligence can be applied as an ideal substitute for humans in some hazardous jobs, such as exploring volcanoes, exploiting coalmines and traveling in outer space—they are really smart assistants to the mankind.
◆雅思大作文中常用的论证方法
Arguments:
1.
explanation
说明
2.
emphasis
强调
3.
exemplification
例证
4.
cause and effect
因果
5.
comparison and contract
比较和对照
6.
facts and statistics
事实和数据
7.
concession and refutation
让步和反驳
8.
classification
分类
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