新六级直击考点---综合改错题五

arge brain and an upright body.

8 Despite of the great difficulties they had, they 8.__________

continued the work without any complaint.

9 We are fully aware of that something must be 9.__________

done to put an end to this situation.

10 We are the same opinion that he is fit for this position. 10.__________

3.代词使用错误

1 We must find out the customs of other races, so that

it will not think us ill-mannered. 1.__________

2 But the people all over the world agree that being

well-mannered really means being kind. Please

remember this, and then he will not go very far. 2.__________

3 Scientist are discovering that sea water can be

very valuable. It has been suggested that their 3.__________

currents can be used to make electricity.

4 While technology makes this possible for four 4.__________

even six billion of us to exist, it also eliminates

our job opportunities.

5 Traditionally, work determines our way of life.

But if 98 percent of us don’t need to work, what

are we going to do with oneself? 5.__________

6 A break in their employment, or a decision to

work part-time, will slow its raises and promotions 6.__________

as it would for men.

7 The conscience of the nation is appeased, while

the population continues to puff their way 7.__________

to smoke, cancerous death.

8 There are many such differences and we shall take

up only that involving language, omitting those that do not. 8.__________

9 A wise and experienced administrator will assign

a job to whomever is best qualified. 9.__________

10 unconsciously, we copy these we are close to or 10.__________

love or admire.

 

答案解析：

１逻辑表达错误：

1.Before→After。根据前文含义，可知妇女是在经过了长期而艰苦的斗争之后方才获得了和男性同样的教育机会。因此此处应该改为After。

2.different→same。理由同上。

3.down→up。前文已说人们赚钱越来越多，因此此处应该是收入增加而不是减少。

4.Nevertheless→Therefore/Consequently。由上下文可至此处应该为因果关系而不是转折关系，即正因为人们的薪水增长了，对于食物与衣物的需求减少，而对医疗服务、旅游以及教育的需要增加了，所以在这些服务行业可以找到更多的工作机会。

5.them→it。本句中without them指的是没有几门语言的知识，此处them错指a knowledge of several languages，然而knowledge是主语的中心词，所以要把them改为it。

6.present→absent。根据常识可知，该句应该是“如果他因为生病而缺席，当他回来时通常就会失去工作”，present不符合逻辑。

7.删去if。该句中的if是误用，even if后面接从句，而该句后面只有their bodies，是半句话，意思为“即使他们的身体”，不符合语法逻辑规则，故应该把if删除，即even their bodies，意为“就连他们的身体”这样才可以与前边的短语构成符合主语表示他们的生活方式和身体状态都得以发生巨变。

8.harmful→harmless。从上文的承接和语义关系看，该段所表达的意思是：科学是无害的，但是一但它能提供技术的时候，那就不一定无害了。因此应该使用harmless。

9.when→after。when表示“当……时”，after表示“……之后”。本句

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