英语四级考试作文冲刺点拨（下）

     There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm to

Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )

Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词

第五段：As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

　No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides

　Computers do play，do强调

　Positive替换important / good等

　A slice of替换a part of

　Unfavorable替换bad

　Impacts替换effects / influences

　We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语

　Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage )

Facet替换aspect

　各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！

　以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。

　1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)

　2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising

　(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good

　3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad

　如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替

　eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with
girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

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