批驳型作文主要是对某一观点或做法进行批评与驳斥。也就是要求考生在这些有争议的问题所上所反映出来的一种作者认为不正确的看法进行批评，然后阐述自己在这方面的看法和观点。
基本结构：
PⅠ S1 Topic: the issue to be argued about
S2 Thesis: my opinion of the issue
PⅡ S3 Others arguments about the issue
S4 Detail 1
S5 Detail 2
S6 Writer’s objection
S7 Writer’s own arguments
S8 Detail 1
S9 Detail 2
PⅢ S10 Conclusion
Or
PⅡ S3 Others arguments about the issue
S4 Detail 1
S5 Detail 2
S6 Concede their validity
S7 Writer’s own arguments
S8 Detail 1
S9 Detail 2
其句型如下：
S1: In recent years, there is a
The past few
remarkable increasing
rowing demand for …
marked change in attitude towards
S2: play an important part in
… become indispensable to …
make an great contribution to
S3: shares idea
But not everyone agrees with the view,
and it is argued that …, and that…
S4: It seems reasonable to assume that…
There may be some truth/wisdom in it, but a
close examination reveals
careful analysis of the argument indicates
Discloses
how fallacious it is
it is not borne out by facts…
S5: valid
There is no sufficient evidence to show that…
Statistical
S6: close to suggest that
To say … is to amount to
S7: foolish
And nothing is so absurd as the view that …
Untrue
S8: The truth/ fact is that…
Rather, the reverse is true.
Just the opposite is true.
S9: least common sense
Anyone with the modest knowledge of … knows that can tell…
S10: summary
In conclusion…
Models
My View on Automated Collection Bus
1． 无人售票公共汽车在一些大城市相继出现
2． 你对这种公共汽车的看法
Dear editors:
(1)In recent years more and more automated collection buses are running on the streets of big cities. (2)While they are praised as “ an advance in technology”, I hold an opposite view.
(3)Automated collection buses don’t fit the socioeconomic circumstances of our country. (4)To judge a particular technology, appropriateness is a sole criterion. (5)That’s to say, any technology introduced or solution adopted should take into account the unique economic, ecological, cultural and social conditions within which a specific problem exists. (6)For example, bicycles can provide more efficient transportation than automobiles in congested cities, and “barefoot doctors” in large rural areas may meet more health needs than highly sophisticated hospitals. (7)The same applies automated collection buses. (8)In a labor-rich country where more and more people are laid off because there are not enough jobs available, people-oriented machines are more suitable than technology-oriented ones. (9)Ordinary buses can not only offer a large number of job opportunities but also create a homey atmosphere which is badly needed in an increasingly impersonal society.
(10)For these reasons, I don’t think that the automated collection bus is a
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